Talk:Heretics and Shrines (1st edition)

Some remarks from Decar,

added here so they are not lost in Slack.

1) watermarks / logos / icons - we need to be consistent

decar [2 days ago] Im not sure saying Finally released by RRG is accurate. It was released by Zman when the license moved

Maj.Frost [2 days ago] I think I have opened the pandoras box

decar [2 days ago] I would start with 3 bullets saying it has been released as CKR, A promo and CSC with 3 different water marks

decar [2 days ago] and an extra tile in csc case

decar [2 days ago] ahh that's in contents

decar [2 days ago] I'd bin the title unless it refers to the spielbox expansion and say it was also reprinted as X and Y

decar [2 days ago] most people will have CKR expansion

decar [2 days ago] 3) >If a player places a shrine directly (horizontally, vertically, or diagonally) next to the cloister [6] if a player directly places or places a shine next to the cloister directly. As it reads the infinitive is split, it's not clear if it's the cloister or the placing thats being direct. I dont think you meed to say directly. it reads fine without

decar [2 days ago] ditto next sentence

decar [2 days ago] 4) You need a way to simplify: >When a player places a shrine tile, he or she may, as usual, choose to deploy a follower to the farm, road, or city segment of the tile, instead of to the shrine itself. if you play with other expansion i could play another follower in a different way. Consider removing 'as usual'

decar [2 days ago] 5) >The challenge is about who can finish his or her building first. 'is about' consider: The challenge is for players to complete their cloister or shrine first

decar [2 days ago] 6) consider a gender neutral phrase for his or her. the problem is it's not clear if you mean: active player or both.

decar [2 days ago] 7) finishes or completes?

decar [2 days ago] 6 cont) The player who finishes his or her feature first scores 9 points. I'm the active player and i finished Sally's feature. The rule is now ambiguous, because I'm the player, but she finished fiest. by feature you mean cloister or shrine.

decar [2 days ago] I'd bin house rules, but them somewhere else

decar [2 days ago] 8) Consider putting some of the footnotes in the text

decar [2 days ago] 9) foot note 7 seems redundant, it's nit clear what was previous or now current...what do the zman rules say

decar [2 days ago] 10) footnotes 9,10,11. i don't care either make it make sense or remove it

decar [2 days ago] 11) other foot notes should be added to an interactions with other expansions section

decar [2 days ago] 12) what happens if both are completed at the same time?